Risking Metaphor
‘Separate Worlds’ by Chip Houser was the Editors’ Choice winner in the 2023 Hummingbird Prize for Flash Fiction.
From its intriguing opening lines to its powerful closing scene, this story grabbed us by the throats and didn’t let go.
Enjoy the ride, with this excerpt from Issue 41, Winter 2024.
Separate Worlds
by Chip Houser
The first time the earth tolls, we’re all in our separate worlds doing what we do. We hear it, even through our noise-cancelling headphones, a single, skull-jarring clang like a big old church bell. Only it’s everywhere, resonating through us, like our bones are tuning forks, tickling our insides. The ground vibrates, too. Not like an earthquake or anything. Just enough to make the leaves drawn in our latte foam quiver. It lasts maybe ten seconds, but it shakes our feeds all afternoon. Everyone posts what they were doing. Our top influencers share their epiphanies. Profound observations happen. Heartfelt resolutions are made. Some risk metaphor. It’s all very unsettling and profound, until it’s not. Eventually, after that initial mind-bomb, something else blows up, and we revert to whatever we were doing before the earth tolled. It was strange, yes, but ours are busy worlds.
Our parents’ reaction to the toll? Watching their beloved ‘news’ anchors ask scientists all the smart questions. The scientists explain elastic deformation and electromagnetic fields and solar flares. The anchors nod sagely. Next up — after commercials — it’s the politicians, promising investigations before pivoting to their usual talking points. Blaming the other side for the debt ceiling, guns, poverty, abortion. It’s always the other side, always the same arguments. We get it, there’s comfort in conviction, safety in entrenched positions. Except there are real stakes here, people. Like our future. Call us Gen X, but it’s almost like they’re wilfully distracting themselves from reality. Avoiding real issues like racism, inequity, the climate crisis. Yes, they’re all real. Sleep on.
Find out what happens next, in Issue 41, Winter 2024!
Chip Houser’s short fiction has appeared in Bourbon Penn, PodCastle, Daily Science Fiction, and various other markets. Red Bird Chapbooks published a collection of his micro- and flash fiction in 2023 called Dark Morsels. He lives and writes in northern Colorado, where he also hikes, architects, and marvels at the miracles that are rescue animals. Find him online at chiphouser.com.
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